Keats had asked for the wording on his grave to be simply ‘Here lies one whose name was writ in water’, but his friend Charles Brown insisted on adding more elaborate wording. Severn, who was making the arrangements in Rome, hesitated. In April 1823 Trelawny arrived in the city to see to Shelley’s remains (‘a Mad Chap’ wrote Severn, ‘who is this odd fish?’), and took an uninvited interest in Keats’s gravestone. He suggested an alternative inscription (see letter, right side).